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All I am is a disappointment in your eyes.
Those goddamn eyes,
which stare at me in disgust for being who I am.
Your horrible, condescending eyes,
that only light with praise when I appear normal.
Stop staring, you won't find anything here to be proud of.
Just look away like you have so many times before.

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-Punx make better lovers-


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The following comments are for "- Storyboard of every day -"
by blackheartedpunk

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I disagree with staring at nothing to be proud of...obviously your a talented writer thats plain to see from reading your other stuff, and if that isnt pride enough your words are written as beautifully as the author was created, thats something to be proud about.

( Posted by: EndlessFear [Member] On: March 28, 2004 )

good stuff good stuff
i really liked this poem.....it was very easy to relate to. nice work

( Posted by: HarDcoRe [Member] On: August 9, 2004 )





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