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Fall from the sky,
reak through the clouds.
The angel dives.
Twisting, screaming,
plead for mercy.
Plummet to earth.
Wings explode, torn apart,
Scattered through the sky like a thousand black balloons.
Speeding, shrieking,
strike the ground.
A once great creature lays in ruin,
fallen angel on the rocks.

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-Punx make better lovers-


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The following comments are for "- Brutal end of the faithless -"
by blackheartedpunk

Fallen Angels
Blackhearted;

I like this poem also. You should read one of the other poets poem, it sort of fall into the same catergory about fallen angels. and yes, they were brutal, but they will get theirs in the end.

I enjoyed this very much. great poem.

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 26, 2004 )





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