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I had offten thought of myself as a toad.
A fat and ugly little nothing.
I once had a pet toad and fed it cat food, and watched as it died.
A oddious little ugly toad, stinking as it rotted under my bed.
I hope oneday to wake as a toad.
I hope one day to finally have my feelings conformed.
That I am and always was a ugly little toad that had deulsions about being a human.
I will wake oneday and will discover that my family never lived, that the ones I love are all fantasy, and I will sit a fat little toad smiling.
And that felling I can never take away.


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The following comments are for "Toad"
by Deathtowords

it's crazy
i like it coz it's written with loose and fuzzy logic and a historical structure that ounces into present and into the memories and into the future via aspirations. felt like a delusional kiddo or a teenager with some crazy world.

its unique and darn i like it i wish i wrote it.

( Posted by: webguy [Member] On: April 2, 2004 )





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