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My most fave pet ever has been my pet duck that I never had, and never thought about.
Ducky he was never named, and as ducky he never lived.
For weeks I would not feed ducky in a house I never lived in.
One day I get obbsessed by duckys anus and poke two fingers up it. I cant explain how exiting I found this.
Duckys face was just normal, and even though he squirmed, I knew he was a dumb fucking animal.
So I push my full hand up ducky, he is flapping and quacking.
I pull down so hard I rip duckys anus open and expose pink fleshy intestines.
Ducky, still alive, sits licking his intesines and then starts to eat at them..... madness I suppose.
"wanna feel the pain of human?" I scream at ducky, my fave pet I never had.
"wanna go totally ape shagging happy. loglogloglog" I scream to ducky.
I grab his beautiful beak..... twist.... and then..... snap.
I force the snapped of beak into duckys intestines.
People die every day..... but ducky, he just wouldnt learn... that his time was up, and he didnt have the brain to say thank you to me for giving him this moment.
I hate ducky and I want to kill everything about him.
I force his elegant kneck up his intestines untill it ripps from its sockets slipping my hand up his body and ripping right threw his fleshy back.
Then I punch at his stump of a body which I created. I take his head out of his body and pull the eyes out.
Ducky he would quack no more. Ducky he would feed no more. Ducky he would feel pain no more.
And I controlled this.... every minute I enjoyed, every minute I loved.

thank you Ducky.


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by Deathtowords

I love this
I really do. I dont know why. It's typed in the most horrible manner and yet something nasty shines through all the ducky muck.

( Posted by: Lord_Snotty [Member] On: March 22, 2004 )





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