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Give To Another
April 11th, 2000 - March 19th, 2004

Don't let the days pass you by
Let go of the dreams you never had

Focus on ignoring all of your fears
Put them off and never remember

Just give up trying to quit
Stop pushing yourself with someone else's hands

Find another and find yourself
Love someone as you had loved me

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http://www.eyescovered.com
...i close my eyes in order to see...


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*Giving*
Matt;

I enjoyed this very much. "Love someone as You have loved me" You know Matt, [Jesus] want us to do exactly that. Thanks for the read.


Blessings,


{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 24, 2004 )

You're a poet
Matt, I really enjoyed this. I stopped writing poetry for about 18 years and just started again. Your poem reminds me of how I feel right now. Thanks!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: March 24, 2004 )

Give Another
VERy much the LORD blessing for all his children.
indeed. Love on another as you would want to be loved. God bless you keep encouraging you to deep even more that is within you.

( Posted by: heart and soul [Member] On: March 24, 2004 )





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