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i sit down in the rain
feeling the anguish and pain
i freeze the sorrow from the years
you hit me hard and gave me tears
i pull the mask from your soggy face
my pain has gone into your heart
and put you in your place
a year has gone and flown right by
and no misery for i
because you are gone from here
because you saw me cry
the pain hurt you way deep down
you knew you had done wronge
and i gave you the heavey crown
of misery brought on
it was a burden to your soul
and you couldn't make it through
and how you knew the pain i had
because my pain hit you

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~trish~

dearest lord...thank you for my friends who care, the ones who help me when i have the smallest look of sorrow on my face. <3.


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The following comments are for "you are gone"
by how do i live with this shame

Beautiful ...
I can almost feel the pain ...

Bit

( Posted by: TheSocietyInc [Member] On: March 22, 2004 )





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