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changing direction
shifting like tides to moonlight
love is drifting out

John K Brewster
"Willows whiten, aspens quiver, little breezes dusk and shiver"- Lord Tennyson

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The following comments are for "drifting love"
by johnb79

crafty, John
I liked this. It's short and bittersweet. Kudos.

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: March 21, 2004 )

Bye Bye Love
This was so good...I almost cried

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 22, 2004 )

Perfect : Johnb79
I just loved every line. Short and sweet, and right to the point.



( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 24, 2004 )

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