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One is better than the other but less than ideal.
For one is superfluos despite the condition.
While the other is essential needless of position.
So with that in mind let this monumentous battle ensue.

Perception is the enforcer with which Reality must contend.
And without a doubt a significant party to ever need to fight.
For size and power it has in abundence.
All in my school can see Perception is the obvious victor.
It shall be able to rule this planet once it wins,
Which allows us to see the importance of this insurgence.

Now Reality is not very significant it would seem,
For it is rough and bland, not as seeming perfect as Perspective.
But Reality is in all things true which, all in all is significant too.
Despair is given when viewing this battle, for at our able glance,
Reality is doomed it would seem, for the blacktop appears to be shrowded in gloom.
How can hope prevail in Reality with Perspective's display of overwhleming doom.

For all who may despise battle please hear me now,
This paragraph commencing is the culmination of this tale.
Many a blow will i now here impart, only in recounting mind you,
But surely the mere mention is enough to ensue hate for war.
Perception arrives first on the blacktop behind my school.
And it's display of power and might has an awespicous oooohhh.
Reality arrives in it's humble yet significant way, but few care to notice,
For Perception the sure victor, deserves our support.
And so Perception sizes up it's foe and prepares it's might.
While Reality merely stands focused and ready despite,
Despite it's insignificant size and weak demeanor.
Why am i seemingly the only one to realize the end of this tale?
For Reality has never lied and obviously it knows what we may not.
So obviously it will win over Perception's shot.
Perception swings and all hold their breath,
But Reality was still standing and much to everyone's amusement,
He had a grin on his face and began to focus his strength.
And Perception faltered and faded away.



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The following comments are for "Perception Vs. Reality:"
by TunerDwarf

interesting
As I read this, I thought of Kitten Courna's brilliant Rhyme & Reason poem. I don't know if she's submitted it here but it is in the writing forum. I felt this was a little too wordy to be enticing but the words you used were well deliberated. I suppose that makes me ambivilant in regards to this poem.

( Posted by: Penelope [Member] On: March 19, 2004 )





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