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warm spring breeze -
nothing in the air but
dandalion seeds and birds chime.

note : inspired by johnb79's "early spring" and by romanian spring :)


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Spring
I could just feel that warm breeze and hear the birds singing...but the dandelion seeds make me want to sneeze...so real..I love it

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 18, 2004 )

Kitty, Pen : John's fault :)
Kitty, here, in Romania, when someone is sneezing we use to say "good luck!" or "party time!". I just say to you: have a wonderful spring!

Pen, yes, it is spring here. It was coming at the same time with John's haiku. So...John it's guilty for the spring (I guess).

( Posted by: inmost [Member] On: March 18, 2004 )





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