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My snowflakes fall just like my rain
They all turn to acid and hit me into pain
they burn down into my skin
Just like my tear drops on my chin
Im drowning in my better depression
It pains me so i'll never learn this lesson
I hate blaming being sad on pills
I hate these emotional hills
When im angry its because of the imbalance in my head
I hate this whne im sad i want it to be me sad! not so chemicals I WANT IT TO BE ME SEEING RED
I hate my parents telling me oh its just your depression
But no I won't go no more therapy sessions
See these tears? there coming out of me
Im sad I am! cant you see
My mind is not crying but i really know it is
these pills dont do anything your wasting your money as it is!
I hate this I want to be better no more suicidal thoughts
No more pychitrists telling me ok when its not
Its me that stole its me that skipped school its me that yelled at you
Its me that cried Its just me that the pain is going through
I will not take one more orange white or yellow pill
I think there stupid, you told me never to do drugs what happened to that? I wont get better I never ever will
I hate this life I hate it more then I hate you saying that im going to be better by the end of the day
No its not no it isnt im not going to be ok
Your not helping me all of you nurses, doctors, and all of the others
And your ask me why I cant get along with others
Im angry at the world its most of your faults that I turned out this way
Something had to trigger it I dont care what you have to say
You ask me why I cant smile in the pictures you take
you know why because theres someone behind the camera that I want to inject hate
I have to lock my door I dont want support
When I do ask for it your never there so just pretend I was never born I wish I wasnt this sort
I have to go someone else is in the room
I hope other people dont end up like me or you.

------
Maestroe


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The following comments are for "Depressed angry girl"
by Maestroe

Very raw
Nice emotion. Lol I am a depressed angry tennager too. How old are you? You write good but it's the feeling behind the poetry that sends people gasping for air.

( Posted by: Glass hair of a virgin bride [Member] On: March 18, 2004 )

yea
Thankyou for your wonderful comment! I am 13. If you have msn why dont you go and add me and we can talk more rappers_d_lite@hotmail.com:)

( Posted by: Maestroe [Member] On: March 18, 2004 )

me too
I loved it. I really liked this line for some reason...
You ask me why I cant smile in the pictures you take
you know why because theres someone behind the camera that I want to inject hate
... I feel your pain dude... lol. nice work!

( Posted by: B*Dizzle [Member] On: March 18, 2004 )

depressed, angry girl
It's so full of pain that the glaring errors almost get lost in it. The errors, rather than detract, give it weight. I wonder, though, if you're not overdoing the errors?

( Posted by: Dfortyseven [Member] On: May 14, 2005 )





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