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I
like a lazy stream
quietly flowing along
in need of rapids

II
like night's flowers
blossmoming in darkness
gone by day's light


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The following comments are for "Dreams I &II"
by chapter1

beauitful
Thank you Claire from you who's work I like it means alot.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: March 17, 2004 )

spelling police
Thanks for your comment penelope beeing new to thia I need all the help I can get.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: March 17, 2004 )

well done
you have 2 very lovely haiku's here...I personally favoured the second one but agree with Pen, that the mispelling disturbed the flow ;)...but I've been known for spelling errors myself...good job
Reba

( Posted by: Reba [Member] On: March 17, 2004 )

Dreams
these are pretty just like dreams are

( Posted by: larryta4 [Member] On: April 12, 2004 )





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