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You ask me if it's worth it
And I break down in tears
I can't just turn around
And forget all those years

you ask me if I love you
And I have to hide my face
you know I do, so why ask
I have to keep my pace

I want so much for us
But to you it seems like nothing
I want for us to be friends
that痴 not enough, but its something

I want u to hold me
But I want u far away
I want u to need me
Each and every day

I want you to love me
For the rest of my life
I want u to move on
Cause if u don稚, you wont survive

I知 not what you're looking 4
I知 not the perfect girl
I知 the one who値l make you cry
Welcome to my world

Confused & painful tears
Will stream down your lips
And when u turn to ask me why
I値l answer with a kiss

Because I love you truly
Because I want what痴 best
Because you deserve much better
I値l die, you do the rest


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