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Little Boys that sneak
their mother's candy are sly.
But they look awful cute with chocolate on their faces.

Creativity asks a question, and seeks its own answers. -unknown

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by wickedz angel

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I enjoyed your poem. I found it humorous and a breath of fresh air. Good job!

( Posted by: KnockKneeHarris [Member] On: March 16, 2004 )

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