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Like being alone on a beautiful beach,
but hearing the strangest sounds,
like a package signed"anonymous" sitting on the ground,
A beautiful painted picture with no artist signature,
A beautiful love letter with no name or picture,
Its like looking at a nice outfit not knowing if it fits,
or baking a sweet pie without an oven mitt,
I dont know what it is about u honestly im confused,
I cant explain these lost but fascinating feelings that i have for you!

AnGeL bArBeR


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