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Daadee! Daadee!
Id like to welcome you
To reality.
Daadee! Daadee!
My ability
To put myself above feelings
Leaves me blooding beneath
Your well-intended transgressions.
Daadee! Daadee!
My denials
Of love stain my entire diary.
I do not waver under obligation,
I think of you as nothing more
Than a poor sadist manifestation.
Daadee! Daadee!
You are superior
No longer because my innocence
Died with my ignorance,
You are inferior.
Daadee! Daadee!
I cut you from me,
To the wind, father,
Just as you wanted.
I can hear you missing me
Already.
But I have a thirst
And a couple of clipped wings,
Daadee,
I do not need your permission to
Be set free,
Daddy.


------
Briggita M.


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The following comments are for "Pedophile"
by Glass hair of a virgin bride

Read your bio
Briggita, you are right, you're not pretty - you're BEAUTIFUL -ok? No, I've never seen you, don't need to - your words speak for you. Keep writing, keep expressing all your anger, grief and fear in poetry.
Best wishes
Paul the Ogg

( Posted by: ogg [Member] On: March 12, 2004 )

Your poem...
-Now... stay strong and believe in yourself, and all that life will offer you. You are God's child. You can fly, but go slow... life will come to you. Take care.

-David Culver

( Posted by: moonrising36109 [Member] On: March 14, 2004 )

Awesome
You reflected perfectly. May God give you the strength to look forward. May your life be full of gardens and flowers.

( Posted by: HedErotic_String [Member] On: March 14, 2004 )





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