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Do you remember that day under the sun
at the beach in the water it was fun
We went around on your motorcycle til i thot i was going to die
Man were still together i could almost cry
Ive loved you for so long and its been 3 years today
I love you babi boy in evry single way
I love your smile i love your eyes n i'll put it in i love your car
I love your scent and im so proud because forever im on your arm
One day hunny were going to make it down the isle which takes me to the degree
Caramel lips will you marry me?

Katherine Hines

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