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Conscious is an illusion just like i was to you
You ignored me every day on the bus and at school
You pushed me down and still i came back
I know i shouldnt have but Im sorry zack
Yur hurting me your starting to leave marks
I just cant see you anymore Zack Clark
My mom is starting to wonder how i got this bruise or cut
I have to like to her babi and im so so sorry but
Im done with the emotional pain done with sufferin
Done with deleting your chats done with bruises done with us bufferin
So take this as my beautiful goodbye hunny because i am gone
You probably dont know what went wrong

Katherine Hines

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The following comments are for "Untitled"
by CatholicVirgo

Uh huh
I know, im not exactly the best speller, and sure go along n kick his ass hehe
My other poem "Caramerl Lips Marry me" Is pretty good, I wrote it to my aunts boyfriend for her as a proposal.

( Posted by: CatholicVirgo [Member] On: March 15, 2004 )

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