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There's nothing better then a young
innocent woman willing to give into
experience. All she wants is to feel,
to know, to learn her body and what it
wants, who it wants, and what it likes. Some men tend to miss out on things in their younger days that they
couldn't have they can have now.
I fall into that category and I'm
going to tell you why. It's a short-
story so it will only take a while.

I'm a married man and I've been
married for thirteen years. I love my
wife but the thrill is no longer there. We tried counseling, romantic
trips, even spontaneous sex, but nothing and I do mean nothing absolutely didn't help. So I took it upon myself to find something to
interest me. What I found, more like
discovered is a little bit beyond my
I met a young woman, fresh and innocent in this world who was ready to shed her naivete and break away from being daddy's little girl. She
wanted me, wanted to learn so eagerly
about the joys of sex. Even a blind
man wouldn't turn down a proposition
like that. I happily obliged her as
my fingers caressed the buttons on her
A smile came to my lips as I saw she
was a nervous wreck. I whispered softly in her ear, words of comfort to
relax her frame. As I devoured her with my eyes and easily maintained this lovemaking movie scene.
It's been so long since I felt this alive. My body is burning for this
sexual high. One time is all I ask all
I will ever need; although, the downfall of great men has always been


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