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My feet are steady and solid as steel
as the world continues to move around
me in this verbal loud hectic atmosphere.
Nothing ever really changes only the
weather and climate, which you can see
but people can remain the same as the
world and you remains still.

The sun rises in the morning, yet you
remain still.
The wind blows and the rain pours, yet
you remain still.
People rush in the morning and evening
to get to work on time, including you,
but the world remains still.

The night comes and the world silence
befalls on us as those who live for
what the night will bring have no idea
how to remain still.
However, you're a dreamer who lives for the moment, a risk taker, one who's not afraid of what the outcome maybe. Will never remain still but
live your life freely.


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The following comments are for "Remain Still"
by Nina

Great job!
I like this, it gave a good mix of someone being rebellious or stubborn and very strong. Thats how it spoke to me anyway, i hope i didnt misinterpert it!

( Posted by: EndlessFear [Member] On: March 17, 2004 )

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