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How despicable Pain is when it festers in me
I hate you, despised creation of remorse
Become the empty nothingness and reside no longer
Your Parasitic demeanor has become almost overpowering
But with every ounce of pain inflicted I stand.
I stand against you and pull you free despite the tear to my heart.
Ha... So silly... I cannot believe this! You seemed so powerful and strong.
How different it is once you ceased pumping me full of your toxin.
I no longer require this display of inadequacy you have taught me.
Take that as well, and this, my fear of rejection.
Whoa... A little light headed. Wow how indescribably unique!
I Have never lost more and gained yet a whole entity.
So... That was your last deceit... That I was only a halve, not complete...


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