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On days like these my heart gets the better of me and I remember...
I remember why it is that Valentine's day exists.
I remember how it feels to celebrate it...
On days like these I have hope for those who prescribe to it.
But today I have mixed my Memories with Knowledge...
So now I remember why I have been single.
I remember how my feelings were let aside and perpetual disease set in.
I remember the doom that awaited that last and final Valentine's
The day was a facade towards semblance within boundaries of love.
I hate what we wrought and fear for a trial later on...
I am never going back to that night and that makes me glad.
This bitter spewing of contagious Remorse I cast aside.
I am never going to let my past repeat itself.
I am going to stand and fight for my future Love.
Never will evil prevail while hope yet endures for Faith.
Power will forever be given to the greatness of He.
Beauty will forever be wrought upon the Love I seek.
Power through pain, impassioned through knowledge.
I have won already you evil consortium of minimalistic pain.
I will laugh once I have buried you beneath the waves of Acceptance.


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The following comments are for "What Is To Gain:"
by Tunerdwarf

What is to Gain!
Tunerdwarf;

Very beautiful poem. Yet it is very powerful to me. I enjoyed this muchy.

Blessings,


{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 10, 2004 )

very nice...
Turnerdwarf, I like this :) I thought your use of capital letters in the punch words is very effective. And this line:

"I have won already you evil consortium of minimalistic pain"

I have tucked away for use at a later time in the face of the next evil I run across..

Claire

( Posted by: Clairesbest [Member] On: March 10, 2004 )

much appreciation
Thanks you two. i appreciate the that you saw my meaning in it. It was a dark part of my past that i tried to express openly and to the full potential of what i felt.

( Posted by: TunerDwarf [Member] On: March 16, 2004 )





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