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well i'll catch ya later
what should i say,
my heart is pounding
my thoughts, fleeting,
your attention is all that i crave.

forever in yours eyes
i can see all my pain,
misfortune through virtue
its just never the same.
i think about my suffering
and realize its all for you,
what can i say?... everything, except what's true.

give me a moment,
nothing more
flex your soul
embrace His light,
find my savior tonight.
assaulted by guilt
trapped in anguish
release yourself to His light.



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