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The pain comes again; I am folded in half as my muscles tighten. This was the result of my search for love... The pain stops, and I begin to breathe again. I hate him; he is the one who did this. He told me he would be there for me. I got a STD and now the time has come to force it out of my body. Still he is not there. It hurts so bad that I start to cry, pain washing over me again. Why will he not believe me that he did this? I know he will never be there. I am told to push. It seems like hours. I scream as I feel something rip out of my body, a second later I see him... He is beautiful, all covered in blood, his nose squished up, his little cone-head. My little STD is now a human to me. And suddenly I realise what I have been doing. I have been lying to myself the whole way through. He was a good friend who taught me how to have fun in a different way. He did lie to me and I will be angry because of that for a while. I don't hate him, I love him, but he betrayed me and left me, for the most part, alone with this beautiful helpless little being that I don't know how to take care of. He hurt me and I don't think I will ever forgive that. But like the good friend he was, he gave me the best gift a boy could ever give me, he gave me Jessie.


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The following comments are for "Jessie- Revised"
by Gami

touching
I fully understand that poem, It really really touched me in a way i havnt felt in a long time, congratulations.
What a beautiful poem in its own sorta way. full props hunn

( Posted by: Maestroe [Member] On: March 15, 2004 )

huh?
full props? i don't understand

( Posted by: Gami [Member] On: March 26, 2004 )





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