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Complete loss of sense.
Love, above all, is greatest.
Too Bohemian?

'He who knows others is learned. He who knows himself is wise.'
-Lao Tzu

'Tomorrow will take us away,
Far from home--
No one will ever know our names,
But the bards' songs will remain.
Tomorrow, all will be known,
And You're not alone,
So don't be afraid
In the dark and cold
'Cause the bards' songs will remain.
They all will remain
In my thoughts and in my dreams
They're always in my mind....
Come close Your eyes;
You can see them, too.'
Blind Guardian,
The Bard's Song: Into the Forest

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The following comments are for "Here's to you!"
by the Co.konspirator

Like this Haiku
This is nice the subject matter carefully handled...

( Posted by: Rightingit [Member] On: March 5, 2004 )

Here's to you

I loved this haiku; especially the second line. It stood out more than the other two.



( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 5, 2004 )

Nice title
I liked the title and the haiku was good as well. Very interesting piece.

( Posted by: LexiconDon [Member] On: March 5, 2004 )

Thanks for the kind words. I've been on a bit of a leave from writing for about nine months or so, and this is the first thing I could get in the midst of a massive bout with writer's block. You guys are all new since I was here last, I believe...welcome, regardless, and thanks again.

( Posted by: the Co.konspirator [Member] On: March 5, 2004 )

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