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Okay go ahead; tell me what I already
know. I'm a girl with stars in her
eyes with an arrow in my gut from
Cupid's bow.

I dream of a man, one that will sweep me away. A man that will hold me and
whisper in my ear, "Have no fear, it
will all go away."

I take a deep breath and slowly close
my eyes and his soft gentle lips sends
me on a natural high. I'm in heaven,
warm, loved, with no fear and no doubt
and I begin to wonder maybe this man
was sent to me from a higher power.

I only laugh it off and wonder what's
going through his mind and it took my
breath away as I saw my life with him
flash into his eyes.

Romantic walks alone at night, candle-
light dinners, and soft music to make
the mood just right. Roses on the bed
scattered all around, breakfast in bed
so the moment would never end. Love-
making exquisite, ecstasy from head to
toe, a ring to promise forever, so
together we can grow old.

But I wake up and I look around my
room and you're no where to be seen as
I sadly come to realize that you were
nothing more than a dream.

You caused my heart to skip a beat
and my pulse became a little frantic,
but of course I know that you aren't
real and I'm just a hopeless romantic.

------
MICHELLE CARROLL


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The following comments are for "Hopeless Romantic"
by Nina

the end?
i really liked this one nina, it read less "forced" than the others in this series. but i think what i like most is that i am a sister in this experience and you have spoke with a sane-ness that i am lacking! i am wondering...is this the end?

( Posted by: Majnuna [Member] On: March 3, 2004 )





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