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you glow in my heart
like the sun, moon and stars shine
my day and my night.

John K Brewster
"Willows whiten, aspens quiver, little breezes dusk and shiver"- Lord Tennyson

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The following comments are for "you are my world"
by johnb79


This is very impressive to me,. I enjoyed it a lot. You portray good imagery in your haiku's.



( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 10, 2004 )

great job! I liked the assonances very was a kind of sweet music...really impressed


( Posted by: lanza13 [Member] On: March 10, 2004 )

I am really enjoying all the responses to my haikus. I didn't know if I had a place in this area, but after the last few weeks and hearing all the feedback from my haiku, I am beginning to thinkI am stronger in the area of haiku than I am in poetry. I really enjoy reading your responses and they have all lifted my weary soul. Thanks to all!

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: March 11, 2004 )

Ah Romance
Any girl would love to hear such words whispered in her ear...a beautiful piece

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 18, 2004 )

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