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once all alone, lost
in a world of strangers, you
suddenly appeared.



------
John K Brewster
"Willows whiten, aspens quiver, little breezes dusk and shiver"- Lord Tennyson


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The following comments are for "a love surprise"
by johnb79

Wonderful
Beautiful love story...

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 9, 2004 )

like campbell's soup
this is hmmm mmm good! Very nice. Made me smile.

( Posted by: amethyst [Member] On: March 9, 2004 )





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