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he writes his poem
in the sand, spilling his heart
as it moves with tides.

John K Brewster
"Willows whiten, aspens quiver, little breezes dusk and shiver"- Lord Tennyson

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The following comments are for "the sand scribe"
by johnb79

could hav e been me!
When I wrote this I was darwing from a memory of when I was 18 years old, and I was in Ocean City, Maryland on vacation, and I was writing in the sand with my finger. Then I layed in my lovers arms as the sun came up and the tides washed out my heart and soul into the big, blue sea.Thanks for the comments!

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: March 9, 2004 )

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