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Creeping up on me-
an intruder- unwelcome
it's my twenty-fifth.

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John K Brewster
"Willows whiten, aspens quiver, little breezes dusk and shiver"- Lord Tennyson


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The following comments are for " birthday burglar"
by johnb79

spared
ok, I'll stop whining, but you summed up the feelings that I feel when you said "25 made me feel like I wouldn't amount to anything"...etc etc, that's right where I am at. Glad you liked it Pen! smooches and cuddles

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: March 3, 2004 )

Wow
And here I am with 60 creeping up on me...I wish I was 25 again

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 3, 2004 )





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