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A mask always hiding the lies and deception
Looking all around and seeing only lies
Looking all around only to find a sea of masks
Why stop this masquerade

Why stop this dreamlike state
Let's spend an eternity hiding behind the masks
And dancing to the same songs till the end of our days
Always knowing the truth

But always hiding it behind the mask
When will the day come when all the masks will be taken off
Are we to hide for all eternity
Never letting anyone know what lies behind it all

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The following comments are for "Masks"
by disOrder

Hiding, that is what we all do, huh? I've heard it before but never in the setting that you've presented. I like the idea of a big dance. I said, great job. =D

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: February 29, 2004 )

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