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vice, life and dice
i feel my life is caving in
an avalanche of needles, rocks and ice
what a wonderful disaster

make me feel so warm
i could keep you forever
let me hold you in my arms
after snow passes through

i love green, i love bennie
keep me coming, keep me going
when no one else is around
you know just how to keep me

just you baby, just you and me
all right, you hold me tight
mirror ball crashes in a crystal fire
oh darlin keep me up all night

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two wrongs don't make a right, but four lefts can make a square.


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