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dreams in depth
all i need is color
touch smell see
in the back of my mind
a cradle of toxicity
poison of the senses
travels through my body
into the hand
and through the pen
what a strange handicap
to know but not say
only touch smell and see

two wrongs don't make a right, but four lefts can make a square.

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The following comments are for "dreams in depth"
by agent-x

koo kooka choo
love your sheer wackiness - this is excellent work, keep 'em coming.
Paul the Ogg

( Posted by: ogg [Member] On: March 2, 2004 )

weird and cool
I like the ending and overall the feel was cool, you write uniquely.

( Posted by: Joe Quinn [Member] On: March 3, 2004 )

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