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the urban angel of ether and cyanide
walking in a proud way
as she flips her hair to the side

such a gentle face until
they saw her razor blade smile
and knew that especially angels could kill

wings of scrap metal fabrication
banded with barbs and a halo of night
the creature void of condemnation

her mouth is sealed from an infernal lie
and her poor wings are so rusted
she can no longer fly

glowing brown eyes foretold a rock n roll messiah
she saw them all come and go
leave her to her castles in the sky.

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two wrongs don't make a right, but four lefts can make a square.


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The following comments are for "l'ange urbain de l'ether et du"
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agent-x
There were some very nice moments in this poem. Nice images and a very good flow. Keep it up. =D

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: February 29, 2004 )

Creativity
I liked the poem but espically how original it was. I was drawn in by the title even thought I had no idea what the heck it was...lol. Good job though

( Posted by: LexiconDon [Member] On: March 5, 2004 )





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