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When people ask you how you are, they don't really want to know.
That Jr. got his nipples pierced so he could strip in a burlesque show.
Or little Suzy's pregnant and has no place to stay.
Or Bobby's drug problems are back again, and your roof is leaking .....Oy Vay!!
The transmission from your car has dropped and to replace it is no easy task.
So when someone asks you how you are, just reply to them.....Don't Ask!!!


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Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "Don't Ask!"
by Nitz Kitty

Opps
Just likeBrittney (sp) Spears I did it again...posted poem in the wrong section....Sorry...The Nitz

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: February 25, 2004 )

Humourous
It is humourous though nitz ..I found it amusing .....well...and poetic too.

Congrats

( Posted by: RightingIt [Member] On: March 2, 2004 )

Rightin it
Thanks for liking my poem....It helps to joke about hurtful things...gets you through this life....I'd rather be laughing

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 2, 2004 )

Dont ask
hahahahaha..you have a flair to convert ordinary to extraordinary

( Posted by: RightingIt [Member] On: March 3, 2004 )

Righting It
Thanks for the rating and comment....that flair didn't come out until I needed it...I guess God knew that I needed something to do or I'd go crazy...My kids think I'm already there...but they like my poems too.

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 4, 2004 )

It you only knew about people, eh?
To the point. I guess down South we used to say "Everything's fine. How is your mama?". Polite to the point of never actually saying anything.

( Posted by: CaptainKeyboard [Member] On: March 10, 2004 )

Humourous Poem
This Poem is right at home in either category. Excellent work! BTW, i'm just curious, where does your user name come from? The Nitz part, i mean.

( Posted by: E.G. Evans [Member] On: March 11, 2004 )

Capt.Key and E.G.
Thanks for the comments on my poem...I guess it is just easier to say fine and go on with your business...but some people want to tell you their whole life story....sometimes it's down right boring and sometimes it bums you out...
Nitz Kitty is my son's nickname for me...I think it means goofy...

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 11, 2004 )





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