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The Will of God

Sometimes I like to think about what I want to do.
I like to think about tomorrow,
And what the day will bring.
And the day after that.
I can't wait to find out what will happen,
Especially in the days to come.
Maybe tomorrow will be good,
Or it might just be another September 11.
Whatever it brings is God's good will,
For tomorrow may be the day,
That our Lord Jesus comes back to earth,
To take us believers,
To Heaven, from earth, for our eternal life to begin.
Then afterwards will be seven years of tribulation,
Then there will be a great soul harvest,
And the new believers
Will come with the second chance that God will give,
To the Kingdom of Heaven they will come.
And all others will


The following comments are for "The Will of God"
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Guess us Buddhists are in big trouble.

( Posted by: gsmonks [Member] On: February 24, 2004 )

Was that last word meant to be a pun? If so, bravo. =D

I liked the theme of this poem but I feel the wording could have been stronger. Maybe if you described more, show me your faith. I liked how you described the Second Coming towards the end of your poem. Keep it up!

Take care.

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: February 24, 2004 )

Chosen few
Quite a few religions believe themselves to be the 'chosen few' - by the time the numbers are added up, there'd only be a few who wouldn't be chosen - hmm?
Have a good day, may the deity of your choice go with you.
Paul the Ogg

( Posted by: Ogg [Member] On: February 24, 2004 )

Kinda sounds like you were just taking notes from Revelations...

( Posted by: goalstad [Member] On: February 24, 2004 )

The will of God
Christian writer; Glory be to God.Who ever endureth to the end, and keep His Commandments. thanks for the posting.



( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: February 25, 2004 )

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