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I cry and everyone comes to me
I smile and everyone comes to me

I see somebody cry and I go to her
I see somebody smile and I go to her

but when she crys nobody goes to her
but when she smiles nobody goes to her

just because she's different
just because she's not beautiful

I go to her and make her smile
she crys she never had friends as mine


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the nice girl_tabita_(tha~belgium~chick)


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