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Today I made a bet.
I betted that today someone will love me.

Love me for me
Not what they want from me.

I think i've won the bet
because here's my two love walking towards me now!


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by Wishlist

Pretty good. It was short but it seemed to work well that way.

( Posted by: Tyrant Monkey [Member] On: December 18, 2001 )

Yes this is quite short but then again it is very explicit. I would like to see a couple of more verses added, it would be very interesting to see where you go with it. Well Done all the same.

( Posted by: annefreemana [Member] On: February 4, 2005 )

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