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What am I doing? It's wrong to feel
this way. Lusting for a man that is
way beyond my age. I have a husband,
who I love and he's everything a wife
could want; yet, I think about this
man who causes my stomach to tie in
knots. He's passionate, he's
exciting, and he makes me feel ten
years younger.

Did I also mention that the sex is
amazing and when you're with me, you
make me absoulutely crazy. Your
good looks and beautiful smile, you
can make any woman walk that fine
line. Even now the simplest touch
from you makes my body yearn for your
touch everywhere.
If I could I would make love to him
right here right now, for everyone to watch and stare.

My lover, my friend, I'm falling in to deep. We have to end this soon because you're all I see in my sleep.
TO BE CONTINUED...

------
MICHELLE CARROLL


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The following comments are for "The Wife"
by Nina

Risque
I liked the theme here, very emotional. I'm curious to see where you are going to take this one.

-SD

( Posted by: strangedaze [Member] On: February 26, 2004 )

Lust in deed
Nina; I commend you on your poem, but if you love your hubsand, why having lust for another man. It's your Flesh that is talking,and your devour in your head.
so personal though.

Blessings,

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: February 26, 2004 )





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