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There is nothing sexier then a woman
who knows her body.
Who loves to show it, flaunt it, and
love it with the right man. A man who
takes his time and pampers it, caress
it, and make love till the sunrise and
She doesn't know it yet, but I am that
man. The one who causes her
distraction and the one who tempts
her to remove her golden wedding band.
She wants it, I know she does because
I see it in her eyes.
The passion, the heat of becoming my
lover, she can no longer deny. I
walk to her and brush her shoulder
slightly with my hand. I feel her
breathing rapidly changing and I smile
at her and lean over and say, "I want
you right here right now. I can no
longer wait...


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