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I just woke up,a chill went down my spine. As I looked out the window down to the beach. I was in the Hospital. I couldn't remember how I got here. All I remember is a big noise, then black,black and more, black... As thoughts swam through my head as to how I could of got here. Nothing complied with my hypothesis. I rang the nurses bell.

"Yes?" she gladly said.

"Could I walk around the hospital?
I could use some exercise.", My voice trembled.

"Sure you have twenty-five minutes to walk around", she replied.

I sluggishly got on to my feet,the sensation of me being able to stand was amazing. I felt like floating on feather light clouds. I lumbered towards the elavator, air streaming by me. I pressed the down button, Luckily the elavator opened instantly. People rushed me through the door kind of like a football game except at the hospital. I was over crowded. Who could of known a hospitals population could be so dense. Especially in Dade city. As the elavator when downward I felt like I had butterflies in my stomach, I felt like I was a child again but no longer when the door opened. The first floor lye before me.
I stepped off onto the cold,hard, white floor. My heelspur bothering me once again every step I took I felt a sharp pain flatten my heel. I pondered if the hospital would fix that while I was here. The glass double doors swung open as I stepped out side. So bright, So beutiful, so real. I began to walk down the sloped sidewalk until I reached a river. The water sparkled as I stared.
I took my concentration off and inturrupted my day dream as a black van drove up to the sidewalk. White folks with jet black suits on. Sky blue button up shirts under the jet black coats and pants. The 8 men jumped out of the car with hand guns. They pointed them at me and threatned to "Pump me full of led" if I didnt give them answers. I asked them,"What answers?"

They replied,"Don't play dumb get in the car and come with us!"

"No way your going to have to force me into the car... if anything!"

Two bulky men came up to me grabbed my arms as two other men opened the back of the van I saw nothing.
I struggled as their lifeless grip thrusted me into the back of the car. The doors shut,locked down and I was knocked unconcious.

The Strange Awakening had begun...

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