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I remeber the endless phone calls you helping me up form emitional falls.
every time I look your way
I can never figure out the words to say.I think about saying i'm sorry,
but why should I be sorry you were the ony being mean all those times and at the party. I hate you so much i really do! but all these weird emotions I know were coming from the way I feel about you. do I hate you? Do I love you? or do I just want you..? I wish someone could help me figure this out. Tell me what all these feelings are about! i know not to fall in love, and becopme trapt. All these new feelings will jsut have to adapt.
You hurt me once and I wont let it happen twice.....
but, Do I love you? Do I hate you?
or do i I just want you?


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Oh Abigail
This is so poignant, an almost (typos!) perfect expression of hurt, confusion, love, hate, need. 'I wish someone could help me figure this out'- beautifully done, my favourite line. Although, 'And at the party' seemed a bit redundant.
Have a good day,
Paul the Ogg

( Posted by: ogg [Member] On: February 21, 2004 )

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