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Here I am, sitting, in the cave west of the woods. I got lost when I was walking in the woods far from camp. I was looking for a trace of my buddy, Chandler. It was dark as soon as I turned around to head back to camp, but then I realised I was lost, when
I saw this cave. When I entered the most strangest sceen met my eyes. Chandler's body was hung up on the wall. His head was on a stick.


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The following comments are for "The Story of Joe Part 1"
by kickflip

Most Shortest
This is the most shortest story I've read in a while.

Your formating was near perfect. Well done. However, spelling, tense, and grammar should all be checked a little bit harder next time. Other than that, well done.

And make it longer! I only let this one through because your quality improved so much. Normally this would have been too short!

--Chris

( Posted by: Chrispian [Admin] On: December 14, 2001 )

o.o;;
Crowe, I think this is only the very first bit of his story as goes the "Part one". It's kinda like a chapter(a short one). I believe that's how Kickflip explained it to me.

( Posted by: Tyrant Monkey [Member] On: December 14, 2001 )

re: most shortest
Tyrant,

I would tend to agree. However, as far as short stories go, this is even short by paragraph standards! lol.

My reply was longer!

( Posted by: Chrispian [Admin] On: December 14, 2001 )

Yeah..
I GUESS you're right but I still know he said it was a chapter. And you can't take that away from me!!!!! No way. It was good though, KINDA climatic but in a way not. I liked it alright.

And Tyrant Monkey knows the facts. ^_~

Tyrant

( Posted by: Tyrant Monkey [Member] On: December 14, 2001 )





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