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I stayed with my friend
we sat in a sofa watching tv
her mam was there and here dad,brother and sister to
we were laughing and making jokes
I was a part of that family

as I came back home
I sat in my room alone
I had no tv, no brother no sister
I was crying, screaming
than I realise I haven't got a happy family
I want to live in a happy family....

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the nice girl_tabita_(tha~belgium~chick)


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