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you have one
I haven't
she died when I was 12 years old
she was an angel, I was told

everytime I go outside i see her
I go to her, she turns around
and she's gone
but she was there I'm shure

so I stay inside hiding from my beliefs
if I picture her in my mind, I can't find her
I'm crying because I forget her
but then I see her she takes away my tears, takes away my fears

I go outside and see her
and leave her there

the nice girl_tabita_(tha~belgium~chick)

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The following comments are for "a mother..."
by tabita

Tabita; You keep your [Mother] within Your heart, never forget her. A few typos, but who hasn't made them. I enjoyed this read, but never,ever, forget your mom. I do on the other hand have one question for you.
"Are you a Young teenager or a young lady?"
The reason I asked, is because you sound as if you are very young.



( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: February 25, 2004 )

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