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it's a sunny day, I go to my friends,
and we talk about shopping and boys.
I'm happy...
I go home and my mom tells stories,
my stef-dad makes jokes.
I'm happy...
it's a rainy day,I go to my friends,
but nobody is there.
i'm sad...
I go home and my mom jells at me,
my stef-dad is gone.
i'm sad...
now I live white my dad :
i go outside but have no friends
i'm still sad...
i go home they jell at me
i'm still sad...
i thought things would change....
i thought wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
because i'm still sad

the nice girl_tabita_(tha~belgium~chick)

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