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he says he doesn't want me anymore
and I smile...
she says she has found a better friend
and I smile...
at school they tease me
and I smile...
I fall
and I smile...
I go home to my room
and cry..........


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the nice girl_tabita_(tha~belgium~chick)


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The following comments are for "smile...."
by tabita

tnx
hey tnx for reading my poem!!
i hided my feelings for everyone in the beginning
but thats over now!!i've changed!i have the best friends ever!!tis was just something i have written in the beginning!!

( Posted by: tabita [Member] On: March 2, 2004 )





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