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Dark alleys people get hurt, die, raped, commit crime, why? We'll never know.

People commit suicide jump off bridges and cliffs these are the silent things we never hear.

A person on the inside distrought hurt but on the outside totally fine.

The world a many splended place but lots of pain inside.

Everday people wonder why is my life so horrible? Why are there people out there suffering?

The U.S. pouring money into war equiptment when there's people out there dying of starvation.

If there were no suffering there would be no compassion.


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angelia


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i think shes not afraid to be dark. she shows the world's true colors. she tells the truth about that america is more concerned about problems in iraq and cleaning that shit up then the problems here in america and not many people are willing to show that




( Posted by: monkey chick [Member] On: February 20, 2004 )

Reflective
You've shown here how the media can control our information access by only reporting sensationalist events, alleged 'newsworthy' items. History is multi-layered, events don't occur independently of everything else. As you quite rightly point out, US dollars (and UK pounds) could be better used feeding the starving.
Nice one,
Paul the Ogg

( Posted by: Ogg [Member] On: February 24, 2004 )





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