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Standing in a field,
boasting his crown, tall and proud.
Mighty is the Elk.


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The following comments are for "The Elk"
by Reba

Elk
You know reba, I came across an Moose long time ago, and was astonished by the way it moved. Thanks for posting this.

Blessings,

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: February 25, 2004 )

agreed
thanks for the comments...
Pen, I agree with you...poetry should flow from your pen, and this particular haiku was a bit pushed out...sometimes I get in a hurry putting my emotions on paper, that I don't let it come as natuarally as it should :)
Reba

( Posted by: Reba [Member] On: February 25, 2004 )

Elk
I thought the haiku was simple but to me it got the point across. I liked it

( Posted by: LexiconDon [Member] On: February 26, 2004 )





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