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Sky above so blue..bright sun shinning
Suddenly the earth rumble's an ominous tune
Sounding like a banshees skirking howls
Warning words may never be uttered
Avalanche! Rolling down the mountain side
Taking out everything within its stride
Natures throwing a temper tantrum
Aided by the once gentle drifting snow
All signs she's about to put on a show
Making missiles out of mighty tree's
Bending some snapping others like twigs
Sweeping a wide destructive path
Moving at a speed so amazingly fast
As churning snow produces a dust cloud
A cannons report could never be so loud
Nature never shows an ounce of regret
Just tantrums when taken for granite


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