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I walk to escape a world that has no love
To find the person who understands
He waits until my soul is to calm so I won't yell
I seek him but i can not find for he only exsists in my mind
He is my mentor the one person who knows what it is like to be different
We talk and lauch ofcorse we dance
He teachs me to be human to smile and enjoy
And I learn once again that the world is as it should be and tp love it for all it is


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by Rincewind

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